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She sits in the dark
waiting to be touched,
   her eyes boring into his
      from the bed
  eyes he can’t see
        but feel
through the blackness

He knows its her from the scent
      The soft but poignant lavender
     Drifting to him
          Filling him
      And he knows this night won’t be long enough
The scent is making his heart race
   But no more than her eyes

‘what are you looking at’
         He’ll ask
   Not that she’ll answer
        Not that she ever answers
All that came from the bed
  From her
      A long sigh
        Longing to be embraced
As if she had waited forever
    For him
  And just discovered
He was here all along

‘do you know who I am’
     She’ll ask
Not that she’ll believe him
  Not that any of his answers would suffice
as he contemplates her dark beauty
    her conceptual beauty
  her wasted beauty
he decides to play her game

‘I don’t want anything more
      Than to just stay here tonight’
    A lengthened night he means
         But forgets to say  
  She tries to put the words together
       The words with the man
  They didn’t sound the same
    And though she did
Does,
    She doesn’t want to believe they’re true
   That he needs nothing more
       Than one night

She holds out her hand
     To the dark
   Searching
Waiting for him to cross
        The great divide of blackness
She wants to tell him now
  Now that she knows he doesn’t want her
    The same unavailability
       Yet from another man
That being held
   feels normal
         Feels like home
  
‘will you hold me,
      I want it always,
        Not just tonight’
   How could she give it up
        Him
         Being held
      After such a short span
To never experience a morning hold
    And the rest
        Barely noticing her want

And how could he not accept
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tempusdracos Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2008
that is gloriosly beautiful its amazing have you seen the new movie 'Australia'?
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VoodooVinciChild Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
aw thank you....no ive been trying but no one else wants to see that so i guess ill wait till it comes out, why do you ask?
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tempusdracos Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
omg you have to go see it lol it's got hugh jackman *melts* lol and nicole kidman, prettyies actor I know lol
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VoodooVinciChild Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
omg i know i LOVE hugh jackman lol!
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tempusdracos Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
*sighs* he so pretty lol
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ItsxMagik Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
The great divide of blackness
That was beautifully intense.
I love the ending.
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VoodooVinciChild Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
aw well thank you so much!
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ItsxMagik Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
You're very welcome.
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singovermyradio Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I love the part about the scent!
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VoodooVinciChild Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thank you it was hard picking just one scent for this!
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