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Set me free
I'll come right back
your what centers me
to the earth
   and it scares me
   and it excites me
can I take over you
   the oxygen i breathe
     ive trained my pores
     to take you in
      at every chance
  but I need more

you said
i look like a flower
but without a bee
  so make something of me

you keep
  this world spinning
without you
  i dont exist
but you couldnt let
that happen
   you wont let me
stay in the dark
   no it's lit up
   with thousands
    of tiny lights
   you keep burning
  for the inspiration of hope
    the sky
    the ground
   its covered in sunshine

everything i hold onto
  and thats the relief
   i count on
an instantaneous reaction
  to your arms

    and my god
  it is never the same
   always magic though
     never revealed before
     by fate
and still
it feels like
  just a taste

  God,
   make us immortal
   give us a another lifetime

    i need more
:iconvoodoovincichild:

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:iconcsnyder:
really love this one
:iconvoodoovincichild:
aw thanks!

--
'what's the hurry?'
'he asked with the eyes more than the lips'
'the heart is still aching to seek'
'ill hardly breathe'

~WITH LOVE v.v.C.
:icontempusdracos:
you found love ;P lucky girl, oh well, my turn to find it next then

--
life is music, music is poetry, we are all poets but it's up to us what we write.
:iconvoodoovincichild:
ha not really...i just like to pretend!

--
'what's the hurry?'
'he asked with the eyes more than the lips'
'the heart is still aching to seek'
'ill hardly breathe'

~WITH LOVE v.v.C.
:icontempusdracos:
it's so fun to imagine what will be, I do it all the time, but I can't write about it, I don't want to realise it
s not real until after it's been real

--
life is music, music is poetry, we are all poets but it's up to us what we write.
:iconadonael:
This one is also good. It looks at greed but not in the way that makes it so sinful but more in the sense that you need it

Once again, powerful stuff :)

--
Literature is inspired by madness but written by reason
:iconvoodoovincichild:
i know what you mean it kills me to write about everything i could have

--
'what's the hurry?'
'he asked with the eyes more than the lips'
'the heart is still aching to seek'
'ill hardly breathe'

~WITH LOVE v.v.C.
:iconvoodoovincichild:
well i believe that when we do sin we dont think of it as sinful act but something that is justified..im just glad i got it out to where someone understand...thanks so much!

--
'what's the hurry?'
'he asked with the eyes more than the lips'
'the heart is still aching to seek'
'ill hardly breathe'

~WITH LOVE v.v.C.

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